| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 01/20/04 at 08:56 PM Nice one Annie...Charlie |
| Posted by Maureen Glaude on 01/20/04 at 09:20 PM a real wake-up call, eh? neat poem |
| Posted by JD Clay on 01/21/04 at 01:18 PM Would you be surprised to know that there are some who believe our dream state is true reality and our daily lives are all an illusion. Your intricate articulation gives rise to this notion. Hmmmm! Evocative stuff, Anne.
Pe4ce... |
| Posted by Carl Walker on 01/21/04 at 07:49 PM alertizizing verse, pop, and its done, thanks |
| Posted by Kimberly Bare on 01/21/04 at 07:57 PM there is a fine line between reality & fantasy; unfortunately that pesky alarm knows all too well how to break it...great read! :) |
| Posted by Rusty C Arquette on 01/21/04 at 08:58 PM Sorry, m'sweet...I meant to turn that bothersome thing off! - There..(fluffs the pillow and lies back down)..Now where were we?..Ah yes... |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 01/22/04 at 02:11 AM *hitting snooze button* let's keep that dream alive! |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 01/22/04 at 07:40 PM and isn't it just like alarm clocks to startle us of such wonderful dreams especially when Anne is content therein. |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 01/22/04 at 10:24 PM Don't know whether to laugh or cry...! |
| Posted by Richard Trotter on 01/23/04 at 10:28 AM wistful and cleverly written, it sticks in my mind. |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 01/23/04 at 03:00 PM Yes, its a wake-up call in the timelessness. Beginning of a beautiful dream. Beginning of BEING. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/23/04 at 05:14 PM Crafty tangy bite size piece of poetry. I like how it can be taken as either dark/serious or light and humorous, as I saw it both ways. |
| Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 01/25/04 at 12:42 AM ahh the jolt of the alarm clock. It seems to cooridinate with everything nowadays...this is as blunt as the awakening itself, fantastic job Anne. |
