distance by Ann Lauren Distance graces forth our simple lives,
of shoving
aside emotions and
dancing with wax lies on that same shore.
Furious
my acid eyes wince at
the span of space between you and me,
so cruelly
taunting all that bleeds and
scattering gray matter across the
broken glass
coast. Your fingertips trace
light maps across my sea glass heart of
soft green lines,
and twisted blue detours
on paper skin now that you are gone.
01/13/2004 Posted on 01/14/2004 Copyright © 2025 Ann Lauren
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Philippa Jane on 01/19/04 at 12:53 AM It's wonderful to see you back. xo. |
Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 10/05/06 at 09:19 PM Thanks for the read. Enjoyed this one. |
Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 04/19/07 at 11:40 PM a refreshing usage of language which add up to a bevy of powerful images. |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/07/11 at 03:13 PM Congrats on POTD! I like everything from the placement and use of the word "shoving", "wax lies",
"acid eyes", that whole "scattering gray matter" sentence. I don't know why I'm picking out separate words when each word in this seems perfectly placed. Thank you. |
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