Home

To NASA, Mars, Stars, and Sanity

by Glenn Currier

 

 

Answered emails

trashed the spam

said I don't give

a tinker's damn

about that report.

Then a call from Mort:

"Print what you got,

ready or not."

 

Elevator was crammed

its doors were jammed

bells were ringing

my ears were stinging.

 

Car wouldn't start

I was coming apart.

Cursed slow poke truck

asked the son of a duck

why he dawdled along

singing a song

when I was late to dine

and forgot the wine.

Eyes bulged and teeth grinded

and bypassing my mind did

my angry foot bolt

right past the dumb dolt.

 

But once again I was slowed

by machines and the road.

Got home and she'd eaten.

I knew I'd been beaten.

 

Before my final crash

I went to take out the trash.

28 degrees felt just right,

I needed cooling tonight.

Then I saw the light of the moon,

looked up at that silver balloon

surrounded by an infinity of stars

and the newly discovered planet of mars.

 

In that perfect circular clearing

this day's damage disappearing,

a moment of peace came to me

and with it a flicker of sanity.

01/05/2004

Author's Note: With gratitude to the Creator and congratulations to the NASA Mars team and their success.

Posted on 01/06/2004
Copyright © 2024 Glenn Currier

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Anne Engelen on 01/06/04 at 08:21 AM

Isn't it just crazy how we let daily life take over...drown ourselves in stressy situations and can't take a step back from society's insanity. And then only a glance at the moon can fill us with such a peacefull feeling...it's just magical! Great read:)

Posted by Maureen Glaude on 01/06/04 at 02:46 PM

fascinating. Boy, I wish I could do the black and white effects on here like that. It's so effective. I felt like I was going on that elevator too, and all the pressure, adventure, sci-fi feeling. Wonderful imagination

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/06/04 at 05:09 PM

OMG! Glenn you've sold out to Rap!! LOL!!! I dig the beat and imagery man. :o)

Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 01/07/04 at 07:54 AM

incredible insight in this piece... it is amazing how "insignificant" our "trivial" our daily problems seem in the huge scope of life... brilliant... blessings :)

Posted by David R Spellman on 01/07/04 at 02:58 PM

Nice to be able to let the beauty of creation wash away the troubles of the day. I got caught up in the frustration of this only to feel the same relief as you describe from the scene you depict in the end. Nice!

Return to the Previous Page
 

pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online
All works Copyright © 2024 their respective authors. Page Generated In 1 Second(s)