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You Touched My Wings

by Glenn Currier

We were meant for each other.

You wayfarer

woman of the journey

walker of beaches.

 

Your compassion leaps across species

settles into my soul

nurtures me

as I begin my new journey.

 

We were meant for each other.

You lover of waterfowl,

marsh dwellers and migrants,

rising across continents

like sage smoke,

smudging our blessings

into your twilights.

 

Shed your sadness upon me.

I will bear it to the stars

shining your sweet soul.

Touch my wings

and feel your spirit rise

on coastal breezes so strong

they cross the plains and oceans

break boundaries, kiss summits

flutter valerian and arcs of orchid.

 

We were meant for each other.

You pray your praise

for my beauty

make me a god

just in time to climb

from my bones

and scatter my feathers--

a prayer to the gentle hand

and unction you laid upon me,

as you knelt beside me

comforting me

in my final moments.

 

My blue bill takes you back

to your birthplace in the sky,

pierces your troubled heart,

cries your blue eyes

and sails me

on a piece of your spirit
as I depart.

 

We were meant for each other.

Now I am gone,

but I left you, my friend

to deliver the grace of my flight

and strength of my hands

to those without light.

Dive as I did,

but submerge your Self

and the quiet gifts

of your giant heart

into the depths

of those you meet

and lift them

on Ruddy wings

to the swift blessings

of my eternity.

 

 

            - Dedicated to Geneva Currier -                                                 December 2003

12/18/2003

Author's Note: I write this for my sister, who, on a recent walk down an Oregon beach, encountered an injured Ruddy duck. This is the story of a moment of connection between two species.

Posted on 12/18/2003
Copyright © 2024 Glenn Currier

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Christopher Shin on 12/18/03 at 05:10 PM

Thanks for sharing. This is a very good poem. I like the description. First time I read it, I thought it was about two people in love. Little did I know it was about a duck and your sister.

Posted by Maureen Glaude on 12/18/03 at 05:42 PM

this is my favorite of all of yours, Glenn. I'm glad it wasn't about a loss of human life for you, but animal life is just as precious and I love how you celebrate nature with the reverence of its due. And a fine tribute to your sister. As life goes on, my brother says he feels even closer to us (Mare and I, his sisters) than ever.

Posted by Agnes Eva on 12/18/03 at 11:18 PM

and i thought it was about two lovers... how unexpected! it worked as a highly metaphoric love piece too. wonderful!

Posted by Betania Tesch on 12/19/03 at 06:37 PM

this is positively inspired. I have missed the simplicity and poignancy of your words. what a beautiful reminder. as always, thank you for sharing.

Posted by Max Bouillet on 12/19/03 at 11:38 PM

Touching scene that plays itself out vividly through your words. Superb images that stay with the reader long after the book has been closed.

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 12/19/03 at 11:45 PM

Touching poem Glenn. Well done....Charlie

Posted by David R Spellman on 12/20/03 at 12:52 AM

A beautiful moment and connection between human and nature - something we should all remain in tune with. Should touch the heart of your sister and all who read.

Posted by Jane E Pearce on 12/20/03 at 08:53 PM

This is so powerful and well written. Jane

Posted by Charlie Morgan on 04/14/05 at 06:31 PM

...ahh, i was gonna say all that the above said so there...peace, chaz

Posted by Ken Harnisch on 08/01/14 at 07:13 PM

A story told vividly and with such love it awes me still. Well crafted Glenn!

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