| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Agnes Eva on 12/12/03 at 04:51 AM ahhh, a sort of riddle. i've read that's a technique in haiku writing (in that context it was the last line that answered the riddle of what the first two lines were doing). here the whole thing is a riddle for 'diary' is my guess? this strikes me as a philosophical description of a special object...it gives me a warm feeling and makes me think of my past 15 years' worth of journals :) |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 12/12/03 at 12:20 PM velvet and worn meams they are tried nd true. |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 12/16/03 at 03:30 AM Whatever. What matters is the 'companion and the friend', who/which can softly enfold heart and mind. The shared feeling. The shared living. |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 12/16/03 at 09:35 PM The image of the pages holding all that might have spilled out onto them of the things of heart and mind give this one a lot of soul! |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 05/22/04 at 09:11 PM You capture the capture of those pages with beauty and warmth. Good work. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 03/30/09 at 06:48 PM Makes me think of the Holy Bible (Judeo-Christian)! Very personal, very warm, very comforting. |
