| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 12/07/03 at 04:07 AM i am a feline connoisseur and i truly love this tiny little poem... just beautiful, glenn... blessings :) |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 12/07/03 at 05:07 AM Fine haiku here Glenn. The final line makes me wonder whether you're breathing peace to the cat or if the cat is breathing it to you! A "purr"fect give-and-take relationship for sure. Well done! |
| Posted by Agnes Eva on 12/07/03 at 05:49 AM heehee- peace and warmth shared between animal and owner. very sweet |
| Posted by Maureen Glaude on 12/07/03 at 07:42 PM so relaxing, isn't it? fine capture of a common experience in this house. well done |
| Posted by JD Clay on 12/08/03 at 04:05 AM Is that you or the cat I hear purring? Good stuff, pal.
Pe4ce... |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 12/08/03 at 07:49 PM Dang...now I miss my cat. Great reflection of a wonderful atmosphere:) |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 12/09/03 at 03:12 AM Splendid imagery! My cat waxes and wanes while she sleeps on my belly, too. Great scene caught eloquently in verse. :) |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 12/10/03 at 03:07 AM Despite the rise and fall, its the rise and fall, the cause of the peace at both the ends. The association is the cause. The association is the effect with the rise and fall. This minimal can be seen from various angles. |
| Posted by Don Coffman on 12/10/03 at 09:23 PM I can hear the purring, a wonderful haiku indeed. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 12/13/03 at 12:50 PM Great haiku. Evokes a sense of serenity. |
| Posted by Kristine Briese on 02/18/04 at 05:21 PM Ahhh, excellent work. My cats think so, too. |
| Posted by Michael Smith on 01/17/10 at 12:54 AM Very worthy to be on someone's favorites-list (how I found it). It speaks an identifiable moment with great clarity and an interesting perspective. Excellent haiku and poem in general.
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| Posted by Joe David on 12/20/11 at 04:45 AM Good one Bro. I see the cat and feel the peace. You must have gained weight tho if you've got an ample girth. |
