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damsel in distress
by Michele Schottelkorbwe have reached an area
which requires more
more from you
more from me
more than you will ever see
so I must walk away
and cry for you some other day
december 4, 2003 12/04/2003 Posted on 12/05/2003
Copyright © 2024 Michele Schottelkorb
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 12/05/03 at 02:18 PM I love the way you choose your words carefully and pack your poems with the sharpness of emotion. You reveal the vulnerability of being human. |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 12/08/03 at 12:19 PM heart rendering work Michele and I think all people, creative have been there, by rights of passage, they must burden the emotional much. |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 12/09/03 at 11:16 PM Resolute and wise. A hard situation in which it would be easy to fall to pieces and yet you maintain and carry on! Great verse. |
| Posted by Thomas K. Hunt on 12/10/03 at 01:46 AM Great peice, catching the distress before it can vester.....smart lady |
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