| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kate Demeree on 12/01/03 at 04:02 PM I think I could set before this page and find loving peace. Beautifly written and presented! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 12/03/03 at 02:10 PM A new word (tallow) for me Glenn, and interesting combo of words and colors to reinforce the rainbow aspect. Thanks for sharing this. :o) |
| Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 12/03/03 at 10:26 PM The literal images and the physical images presented in this haiku do very well to compliment each other |
| Posted by Vimal Rony on 12/04/03 at 01:21 AM A beautiful haiku this is.And Glenn,it seems u have got comfy with the html hehe.Mastered it? |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 12/05/03 at 07:33 AM this is an absolutely beautiful haiku... thank you for bringing us into your world... blessings :) |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 12/09/03 at 03:10 AM Fascinating subject with vibrant images that fill the reader's mind with fresh subjects to think about. Thanks for sharing. :) |
| Posted by Maureen Glaude on 12/10/03 at 02:30 PM fascinating. I must bring this to my haiku group in Jan. as they love all things eastern. Your colors are great too. Lovely, really lovely |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 12/13/03 at 12:53 PM Intriguing and colorfully descriptive in word and color. |
