| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Susan Q Tomas on 11/11/03 at 05:12 PM I really dig this one Prima. Good job. Tantilizing. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 11/12/03 at 05:13 PM Superb addition to the "hot tomales" file. Now where can I get a cold shower around here, or better my own dirty gurl as you've described??? |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 11/12/03 at 05:29 PM so easy to visualise Quin...gosh, now i'm blushing hehehe ;) |
| Posted by Maryellen Lebeda-Parra on 11/12/03 at 06:56 PM ;) just my style! |
| Posted by Lauren Singer on 11/12/03 at 08:52 PM hahaha oh-so dirty... and oh-so fun! |
| Posted by Melina Raven Maness Diebold on 11/12/03 at 09:40 PM Wow! Sweltering sweaty, dusky, and sensual! |
| Posted by Rachelle Howe on 11/13/03 at 03:29 PM sex is indeed universal. :) agreed, keri. any particular reason that you chose this rhyme scheme? like, i assumed it was to write an entire piece with the sam-- wait. smoking crack again. spoken word piece? |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 11/13/03 at 07:05 PM Does much more than speaks for itself. A wonderful rhyme that ripples through the reader in artful ways. Great read that burns passion into the soul. |
| Posted by Lori Johnson on 11/13/03 at 08:11 PM oool la la! :)
Heh...& y'all wonder why I live it Alabama?? ;)
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| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 11/13/03 at 11:04 PM yes...one needs to no map to know where to find him, or herself, in this poem! |
| Posted by Ginette T Belle on 11/14/03 at 01:16 AM god that's good...beautiful flow... |
| Posted by John Ilotan on 11/14/03 at 01:47 AM Flows slow and sensual, the words just roll off the tongue. You outdid yourself Quin. |
| Posted by Madeline Pestolesi on 11/14/03 at 05:05 AM I really enjoyed this. They should teach classes to men in college... |
| Posted by Leslie Ann Eisenberg on 11/14/03 at 03:59 PM grrrr. girl. great rhythm. a rolling ride of ecstasy. |
| Posted by Don Coffman on 11/14/03 at 08:24 PM An exquisite use of language, playing with the words, the flow of rhyme and rhythm, all done just right to make it explicit yet subtle. Definitely a nifty verse. :) |
| Posted by Thomas K. Hunt on 11/14/03 at 11:41 PM The title is very fitting...excellent work |
| Posted by Traci Mabats on 11/17/03 at 05:04 PM have you ever considered moonlighting as a romance novalist? really |
| Posted by JD Clay on 06/07/07 at 04:09 AM This is classic! I'd tell ya what I really think but my tongues hard. |
| Posted by Mo Couts on 06/04/11 at 06:43 PM Fiery and makes me need a lot of things, notably, a cigarette, even though I don't even smoke! LOL! |
