Fade by Kate DemereeThe heart cries silently quiet drops That drip slowly, as youth and dreams Ebb from the pool of hope. Candles left to long burning In candy glass window frames Warp and melt the surface Till what the eye beholds Resembles a fun house scene From a Mae West movie Where W.C. fields plays Don Quixote
Flick, Click, Flutter the Frames stutter on the screen As the actor exits Stage left a snaggle toothed Smile and glib lines. Promises To return some distant day When fortunes child has grown.
Slow Fade To Black
11/10/2003 Posted on 11/10/2003 Copyright © 2025 Kate Demeree
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Posted by Max Bouillet on 11/12/03 at 07:29 PM Cinematic imagery that puts the reader in front of the lens and forces them to analyze themselves through the characters presented in this piece. Exquisite. |
Posted by Glenn Currier on 11/13/03 at 03:18 AM YI hear your voice describing with such delicate sadness the losses we all will face or are facing. I can see that warped frame, the past flickering with ironic humor. Such a sober reflection in this poet's hand is a thing of beauty. |
Posted by David R Spellman on 11/13/03 at 01:59 PM What an unusual contorted and compelling mixture you've woven with this one Kate. Such an interesting twist of characters and images that leaves me fascinated by the workings of your imagination and wordplay. Loved it! |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 11/14/03 at 05:53 PM Lively fun read as we travel inevitably to the title. Reminds me of Van Gelis' 80s era song: Friends Of Mr. Cairo. |
Posted by Charles E Minshall on 12/03/03 at 01:29 AM Fun poem Katie. The Spanish have a new breakfast
cereal out made from kiwi fruit and oats. they
call it Dawn Ki Oatey. (I couldn't resist)...Charlie |
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