Rain (Haiku)

by Thomas K. Hunt

The clouds swirl
As the heavens open up
The earth is cleansed


Posted on 11/06/2003
Copyright © 2024 Thomas K. Hunt

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Glenn Currier on 11/06/03 at 02:04 PM

You put me there as I await the cleansing. Good expression in the haiku form.

Posted by Cole Miller on 11/11/03 at 04:44 AM

I agree with this painting a lovely picture... word choice is great.

Posted by Traci Mabats on 11/22/03 at 02:01 AM

Im jealous, I cant write hakiu to save my life. This is a go-oo-od one.

Posted by Kara Hayostek on 02/17/04 at 09:41 PM

As rain can cleanse the earth, a good cry can cleanse the soul. This haiku is beautiful and refreshing.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/19/04 at 04:22 AM

I like the accurate capture and impact of this. So true, that last line.

Posted by Paul Marino on 05/13/05 at 04:57 AM

that is a particularly nice image.

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