| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 11/06/03 at 02:04 PM You put me there as I await the cleansing. Good expression in the haiku form. |
| Posted by Cole Miller on 11/11/03 at 04:44 AM I agree with this painting a lovely picture... word choice is great. |
| Posted by Traci Mabats on 11/22/03 at 02:01 AM Im jealous, I cant write hakiu to save my life. This is a go-oo-od one. |
| Posted by Kara Hayostek on 02/17/04 at 09:41 PM As rain can cleanse the earth, a good cry can cleanse the soul. This haiku is beautiful and refreshing. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/19/04 at 04:22 AM I like the accurate capture and impact of this. So true, that last line. |
| Posted by Paul Marino on 05/13/05 at 04:57 AM that is a particularly nice image. |
