Left by Glenn CurrierOn the ledge
on the edge
I gaze into the abyss
of your apathy.
I tender the coin of my soul
to your slithering emptiness
there is no hand or heart for it.
To me they are pearls
but your pride has plucked
what care may light your eyes
to hold them for a moment
in your mind.
Shout or weep
but do not sleep
away the crystal
of my love
the emerald
of my life. 10/21/2003 Author's Note: Written after a particularly discouraging day as a teacher.
Posted on 10/22/2003 Copyright © 2024 Glenn Currier
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Posted by Siri Lipscomb on 10/22/03 at 03:41 AM Adolecents miss so much. Some of them will "get it" some day and thank you. Beautifully written. |
Posted by Maureen Glaude on 10/22/03 at 12:00 PM this made me think of the film The Dead Poet's Society. yes, you want to see passion in students. It's what my daughter hates not finding in a prof. too. I have a niece just starting teaching, not much older than her students, and I'm sure it's a real challenge. But a worthy one. beautiful work and message |
Posted by Kate Demeree on 10/22/03 at 03:56 PM This is absolutley loveley... the imagry is fantastic. That seems such a pat thing to say, yet it isn't with your words you touch the heart of the reader. I think that your students are fortunate in having a teacher with such passion. |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 10/22/03 at 04:32 PM Quite effective Glenn, even more so with your Author's Note. This piece could also easily be interpreted as one written to a former lover. That's what I thought it was initially. |
Posted by Anne Engelen on 10/22/03 at 05:07 PM I can really feel your passion in this one and also some disappointment. Beautifully written:) |
Posted by Robert Cameron Hazelton on 10/23/03 at 01:13 PM Great poem. I can feel your frustration. |
Posted by Max Bouillet on 10/26/03 at 03:31 PM Apathy is the most lethal of emotions. Great verse that really says a plenty! |
Posted by George Hoerner on 07/17/09 at 01:11 AM Today's environment for teachers must be a great deal different than when I went to school. I had three teachers in high school that had quite an impact on me. The first was the guy who taught geometry. Up to that point I was just scraping by. He stood up there the first day and started drawing figures and doing a proof. I watched and it came to me so easily. Our chemistry teacher didn't realize that 3 of us knew how to get into the chem lab before school started and we used make nitroglycerin in small quantities. I laugh today when they talk about people making bombs. We make pipe bombs and set them off in open country fields. Good write sir! |
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