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An Ant measured an Ant, five feet six inches.

by Ashok Sharda

 

 

 

 

 

 

An Ant

Measured an Ant

Five feet six inches.

 

Looking through my

Magnifying glass

I watched an Ant

Rolling out a tape

As big as a tape is to a man

Admeasuring the other Ant

Five feet six inches.

 

Exclaimed the Ant who measured

Five feet six inches -

‘Oh! I am as big an Ant

As a man is to a manÂ’

‘Yes’- chuckled the other Ant and said -

‘As big an Ant

As an Ant is to an AntÂ’

 

An Ant measured an Ant

Five feet six inches.

 

 

 

 

 

10/20/2003

Author's Note: Only that it wasn’t looking. Rather SEEING. A simple reality that realities are relative.

Posted on 10/20/2003
Copyright © 2024 Ashok Sharda

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Anne Engelen on 10/20/03 at 05:02 PM

and I already had a headache, now this makes me ponder more;) I love your writing.

Posted by Cole Miller on 10/20/03 at 06:17 PM

perception is reality. this is a great way of showing just how relative reality is.

Posted by Mara Meade on 10/20/03 at 06:43 PM

Ah...how things change when we use different lenses, eh? Loved this one, Ashok. Amen!

Posted by Traci Mabats on 10/20/03 at 07:13 PM

Golly, thats a really big ant.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 10/21/03 at 02:21 AM

Quite observant Ashok. Interesting reflection and refraction of those titans of the insect world.

Posted by JD Clay on 10/21/03 at 03:39 AM

Perspective poetry, Ashok. And you, as big to the ant. With or without the glass. Peace...

Posted by Graeme Fielden on 10/21/03 at 12:30 PM

A quirky little twist to the subject of relativity ... nice one Ashok!

Posted by Jason Wardell on 10/22/03 at 12:42 AM

Ah, I love the perspective. Wonderful stuff. Relativity is fun, no?

Posted by Siri Lipscomb on 10/22/03 at 03:38 AM

Very wise, wondrous brother... er, that is "wondrrrrrrous brrrrotha". Thought provoking as usual in your work. Thank you. Heart, star

Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 10/24/03 at 07:02 PM

My dose of deep thoughts for the day :)

Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 10/29/03 at 07:29 AM

your reality is fast becoming a mantra to me... bravo, my friend... blessings...

Posted by Glenn Currier on 11/24/03 at 12:33 AM

Ah, to have a poet stop, observe, use his wordmeasure on such an astounding creature is not only great fun, but in your inimitable manner, profound.

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 12/11/03 at 09:42 PM

My relatives are reality. Good poem Ashok...Charlie

Posted by Rula Shin on 03/18/04 at 10:27 PM

The senses cannot be trusted...this is one reason why realities are relative - because sense is relative. If I am to learn or understand the 'truth' purely by sight then I will conclude that the sun is the size of my thumb and the world is flat...what if I were to look through the eye of a telescope? Or the eye of a distant satellite? Or the eye of God? Is there ANY end to relativity or are the planes of perspective infinite? Will I ever truly SEE or will it be SEEING on one plane and LOOKING on a different plane? Am I missing the intended meaning of this poem? No. It's all relative hahahahaha - I Love this Ashok :-)

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 08/08/04 at 01:56 AM

Seems you are stressing that looking and "seeing" are not necessarily the same thing! Chanllenging thought!

Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 11/11/05 at 08:26 AM

Two hairs in my cup of milk is too much. Two hairs on my head is too less. Relativity. Congrats on POTD!

Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 11/11/05 at 01:05 PM

eleven eleven make a wish, so happy today it's ashok's dish!... blessings on POTD, my dear friend...

Posted by Laura Doom on 11/11/05 at 03:01 PM

It's said that, one day, ants may rule the world - but will they measure up to the task? Whatever, I have few relatives, but a comparatively large number of them are Ants, though they would not beseen that way...at least whilst looking through the other end of Rula's telescope :)
As good a POTD as can be subjectively measured - seriously entertaining stuff Ashok
I measured myself recently and, despite not being a Man 'man', was surprised to learn that I am five and a half ants tall, when viewed through Ashok's perspectoscope...

Posted by Michelle Angelini on 11/12/05 at 03:50 AM

Ashok, Congratulations on POTD! I can't believe I didn't comment on this, as I thought for sure that I did. I'm not one who usually observes ants, but maybe I should, just the way I do bees.
~Chelle~

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 11/12/05 at 06:53 AM

Congratulations for poem of the day Ashok. Funtastic. I had an aunt that was four foot six...Charlie

Posted by Delilah Coyne on 12/07/06 at 04:33 PM

This is a real gem. Such a wonderful perspective.

Posted by Thomas K. Hunt on 07/30/09 at 05:04 AM

A very profound observation on the way reality sizes things up....excellent read...

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