Poetry In Comments... To Q The Emerging Poem

by Kate Demeree

A Comment By Q

"Let's ride with the wind in misty cloud
Hearing the whispers and whimpering sound
Of harvest night's darkened gloom
As we gaily dance in the harvest room."

An Answer From K

Pluck October stars to wear
Garb for only those who dare
November sky will be my gown
Two Leaf Dancers from Harvest Town
When Jack will gladly light the way
What need have we for the day
Softly now, twirl we
In a moment that will forever be

Q's Reply...

Let's dance away among poetic stars.
Twirling between the planets, Venus and Mars.
Laughing and celebrating the night away.
Leaving all cares of each tiring day.


Author's Note: I hope you do not mind my quoting you Q... Or my posting of the answer. Thank You for the comment... *soft smile*.. it kind of sparked it's own bit of poetry.. lol

Posted on 10/11/2003
Copyright © 2021 Kate Demeree

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Michelle Calhoun on 10/11/03 at 04:27 AM

*smiles* from ear to ear and only Kate knows why. *giggle*

Posted by Anne Engelen on 10/12/03 at 02:24 PM


Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 10/13/03 at 07:06 PM

I guess I'd be biased voting on this. It was great fun, Kate. :)

Posted by Glenn Currier on 10/14/03 at 02:18 AM

What a georgeous collaboration. You seem to fit hand-in-glove, complementing and enhancing the dance.

Posted by Jack Lanier on 10/22/03 at 03:18 PM

Great rhythm with this one as well as a lot of color, Kate. Great work...Jack:)

Posted by Max Bouillet on 10/28/03 at 08:05 PM

Two voices blended well together! Great images and banter! Exquisite!

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 10/29/03 at 04:42 PM

Well, the comment and the response, both are vibrating with refined energies. They are, it seems, the cause and the effect, of this beautiful piece.

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 10/30/03 at 12:02 PM

a wonderful back and forthing.

Posted by Jean Mollett on 05/08/07 at 03:35 PM

Hi kate, This is quite different from what I'm used to reading. Great write. It's beautiful.

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