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and the beat goes on... (abecedarian)

by David R Spellman

Acoustic bedevilments
collectively destroy
electrically fretting guitarist’s
hopeless improvisations –
just killing licks

organists proclaim,
quickly reverting,
skillfully trumpeting
undulating vibrations
with xylophones
yawping zestfully.


Posted on 10/09/2003
Copyright © 2024 David R Spellman

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Anne Engelen on 10/09/03 at 02:32 PM

Abecedarians seem indeed very trendy right now. They are so darn hard to do! But you managed more than well again! Great read David.

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 10/09/03 at 09:17 PM

You write with such talent in so many forms. A humorous and evocative poem.

Posted by Kate Demeree on 10/10/03 at 01:31 PM

"WOW..." you never stop amazing me! This is Terriffic! Amazing is the right word, sheesh I can't even get past the first few letters... lol and you made it all the way... *shakes head in wonder*.... Hats off to you!!!!

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 10/10/03 at 04:26 PM

LOL! Works really well David, or should I call you Jimi? Quite innovative!

Posted by Brian Francis on 10/13/03 at 01:02 PM

Great work David. Difficult form handled with skill. Good job --bf

Posted by Mara Meade on 10/13/03 at 01:32 PM

Heh - jazz versus classical in a great form... love it!

Posted by Vimal Rony on 10/13/03 at 10:11 PM

Excellent!I am amazed.Great work,David.

Posted by Glenn Currier on 10/14/03 at 02:08 AM

What an undertaking this form is, and you did it oh so well, David. Maybe I will take a stab at it.

Posted by Don Coffman on 10/16/03 at 03:16 AM

Wow... now that's an abecedarian. I'm awed.

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