| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kristine Briese on 10/05/03 at 04:53 PM Beautifully romantic, and so sad. Excellent piece. |
| Posted by Maryellen Lebeda-Parra on 10/05/03 at 05:39 PM wonderful sunday morning ... wish mine was the same =( |
| Posted by Rachelle Howe on 10/05/03 at 08:40 PM aww, this is so cute. *GRIN* lucky m'er f'er. :) i wish i was able to wake up to a girl like this. *sniff.* |
| Posted by Susan Q Tomas on 10/05/03 at 09:56 PM Very romantic. I like your use of "vacation". And now that it is cold there, it must be really hard to get out of the nice warm bed. |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 10/06/03 at 04:30 PM The associations will bring the moments back, again and again. The moments so alive. |
| Posted by Ginette T Belle on 10/08/03 at 01:49 PM "I vacation to my dreams"...what a beautiful line...lovely...
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| Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 10/08/03 at 03:27 PM Romantic and touching |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 10/08/03 at 04:43 PM A good time to be in bed. Thanks for the well worded reminder. Sigh...still four days away. |
| Posted by Kate Demeree on 10/10/03 at 03:12 PM *soft smile* ummm... bittersweet is this one... the sweetest of touchings, the pain of parting... sort of like love and life itself. Very well written it reaches out and touches. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 09/12/08 at 12:08 AM Glad I was able to read this again. A worthy choice indeed for POTD Quin, and a pleasant surprise. Congrats! Chris :o) |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 09/12/08 at 12:25 AM Congrats on POTD! |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 09/15/08 at 03:58 AM "CRUNCH". A novel in so few words... beautiful |
| Posted by Keith McFarlane on 09/18/08 at 07:15 AM I really love the rhythm here -- its such a reare gift that allows certain folks to bid words play together just so. Tight, expressive, lyrical. Just perfect. |
| Posted by Leslie Ann Eisenberg on 09/20/08 at 04:31 AM this is one of the first poems i ever put on my faves list. how did i never comment?? I vacation
to my dreams....i'm breathless and quietly...remembering.....wistful am i...congrats on POTD. long overdue! ooo's pk |
