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no matter what

by Michele Schottelkorb

why do we turn upon ourselves
when there is no fault here
continually beating our souls
when we hold each other dear
 
why can't we just break it down
rummage through the muddle
I'd only wish to be with you
if stuck in a sinking a puddle
 
try to see, as I will too
our paths have greater meaning
know I love you everyday
no matter what it's seeming

09/29/2003

Posted on 09/29/2003
Copyright © 2024 Michele Schottelkorb

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Lori I Wolfe on 09/29/03 at 01:48 PM

I like this poem ... When things are dark and gloomy you give back a touch of light filled with hope ..."know I love you everyday no matter what it's seeming" great work!

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 09/30/03 at 12:48 PM

imbued with hope and harmonies, this subtle piece of writing.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 09/30/03 at 04:27 PM

Sure can relate to that first stanza...something I often ask myself. :o)

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 10/02/03 at 06:31 AM

Sounds full of understanding and a bit assertive. Positively assertive.Emotions are here but the intellectual centre is alive. Brilliant.

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