| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 09/28/03 at 01:22 PM Well, it proved to be productive at the end of the day. The contrast of the demise and arise sounds cyclic, like 'moods'.
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| Posted by JD Clay on 09/29/03 at 12:53 PM This poem is like looking through a window at night and suddenly the stars appear. The tone and texture in your words superbly crafted to roam the poetic mind and invent a new and exciting universe. Oh, the magnitude!
Peace... |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 09/29/03 at 07:16 PM Yes.... what Jadi said.... but I notice, too, that it is usually toward the evening, when things are still and the shadows are darker and peaceful, that I write. Like everything from the day is swept into this time and the words come...finally. Absolutely beautiful. And Lavonuna... thank you, too. I hole each of you in high regard. |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 09/29/03 at 07:17 PM "hold", not hole. Sheesh, that just messed up the karma, didn't it? |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 09/30/03 at 07:01 AM i'm glad Lav envouraged you to write! love the feeling this poem gives me. |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 09/30/03 at 10:05 PM the night is the inspiration for all. Great verse that gives tribute to the noble night. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 10/02/03 at 03:59 AM Reflects me also like a mirror. Rock on sir! |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 11/12/03 at 12:54 PM visually enchanting... like a writer's dream... blessings... |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 11/12/03 at 01:49 PM Great POTD!! Congrats buddy :) |
| Posted by Kate Demeree on 11/12/03 at 07:33 PM Congrats on POTD... *smiling* I think I read this earlier, and commented wondering where the comment went about friends and poetry how they seem to go hand in hand.... |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 11/12/03 at 10:44 PM Creative look at the ending hours of a day. Definitely a mood piece, a bit melancholy, wistful.
Congratulations on POTD! |
| Posted by Alex Smyth on 11/13/03 at 04:57 AM Ohhhhhh, that feeling, you have captured it perfectly, and such a wonderful pick for POTD! Congratulations! |
