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Moth Haiku
by Glenn CurrierThe moth has wings of orange,
spots of black and white.
Tao-moth: darkness and light.
09/19/2003 Author's Note: Dedicated to Kate Reynolds who has holy wings.
[I know you aren't supposed to rhyme haikus, but this is the way it came to me. Forgive me, great haikugod, for my offense.]
Posted on 09/19/2003
Copyright © 2024 Glenn Currier
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| Posted by Kate Demeree on 09/20/03 at 01:57 AM *big smiling hug*.... rhyme or no.. I love it! I truly wish I had the wings you credit me with.... You my friend have given me a smile, and a beautiful glow inside... Thank You! (personaly, I love the flow of this.. the rhyme indeed fits) |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 09/20/03 at 03:24 AM 'Tao-moth: darkness and light'..the reconciling force, where the active and passive forces meet together to metamorphose into something new. Kate by her essence is a reconciling force rather than the passive as she is externally. And to hell with the Haiku Gods.
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| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 09/26/03 at 04:43 PM Didn't you know Glenn...rules were meant to be broken, or as the British SAS say in their moto, "who dares, wins." :o) |
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