|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 09/15/03 at 02:46 PM|
as far as my assisting, oh, it was nothing. but this poem, it is everything you are.
|Posted by Ken Harnisch on 09/15/03 at 09:24 PM|
Assisted or not, this is pure poetry from your heart, Kate...and no one is fooled..:)
|Posted by Max Bouillet on 09/16/03 at 09:29 PM|
This brings back a great memory for me. I used to believe if I caught a leave that blew off a tree before it ever touched the ground that I would be blessed... maybe I should believe again. It was a great feeling. Thanks for letting me remember.
|Posted by David R Spellman on 09/16/03 at 11:19 PM|
You capture the coming of fall and the follow up of winter so splendidly with this one. The light-heartedness of it lightens up my mood, making it even easier to accept the season change.
|Posted by Glenn Currier on 09/17/03 at 03:30 AM|
Oh Kate, my love, you have absolutely outdone yourself with this one. It breezes and pleases the eye and the ear... you are a neo-robertfrost. The delicate beauty of this one flew into my heart and you with it. Lovely poem.
|Posted by Graeme Fielden on 09/18/03 at 02:29 PM|
a brilliant encapsulation of autumn ... i can see it outside my window right now ... truly a well written piece! - Nice one Kate :)
|Posted by Mainon A Schwartz on 09/18/03 at 08:46 PM|
Beuatiful-- though I was a bit thrown off by the nightgowns; it's the only piece of obscure imagery, and as such doesn't seem to fit in what is otherwise a focused and well-written poem. Please don't let my comment detract from the kudos of everyone else, for the compliments are certainly well-deserved.
|Posted by Ashok Sharda on 09/20/03 at 03:18 AM|
'the lucky few
Who fly upon the breeze', in their moments of libration. Its nice to 'feel' someone feeling one with the nature.
|Posted by Dana E Brossard on 12/05/03 at 12:51 PM|
**smiles** Very nice =)
|Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 12/06/12 at 12:24 PM|
Kate, this is as beautiful and enchanting to me now as when you first wrote it, so long ago it seems.