| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 09/15/03 at 02:46 PM as far as my assisting, oh, it was nothing. but this poem, it is everything you are. |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 09/15/03 at 09:24 PM Assisted or not, this is pure poetry from your heart, Kate...and no one is fooled..:) |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 09/16/03 at 09:29 PM This brings back a great memory for me. I used to believe if I caught a leave that blew off a tree before it ever touched the ground that I would be blessed... maybe I should believe again. It was a great feeling. Thanks for letting me remember. |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 09/16/03 at 11:19 PM You capture the coming of fall and the follow up of winter so splendidly with this one. The light-heartedness of it lightens up my mood, making it even easier to accept the season change. |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 09/17/03 at 03:30 AM Oh Kate, my love, you have absolutely outdone yourself with this one. It breezes and pleases the eye and the ear... you are a neo-robertfrost. The delicate beauty of this one flew into my heart and you with it. Lovely poem. |
| Posted by Graeme Fielden on 09/18/03 at 02:29 PM a brilliant encapsulation of autumn ... i can see it outside my window right now ... truly a well written piece! - Nice one Kate :) |
| Posted by Mainon A Schwartz on 09/18/03 at 08:46 PM Beuatiful-- though I was a bit thrown off by the nightgowns; it's the only piece of obscure imagery, and as such doesn't seem to fit in what is otherwise a focused and well-written poem. Please don't let my comment detract from the kudos of everyone else, for the compliments are certainly well-deserved. |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 09/20/03 at 03:18 AM 'the lucky few
Who fly upon the breeze', in their moments of libration. Its nice to 'feel' someone feeling one with the nature. |
| Posted by Dana E Brossard on 12/05/03 at 12:51 PM **smiles** Very nice =) |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 12/06/12 at 12:24 PM Kate, this is as beautiful and enchanting to me now as when you first wrote it, so long ago it seems. |
