| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 09/09/03 at 04:21 PM Wow! Such an intensely sensual piece filled with all the power of passion. Loved the line "Undoing the laces Of thought." And the ending is such a magnificent culmination, a roaring blaze.
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| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 09/09/03 at 04:48 PM The title is suggestive. The suggestions scorching. Words and their inherent meaning full of passion, infectiously. |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 09/10/03 at 02:19 AM Wow! sexy......Charlie |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 09/10/03 at 06:34 PM Mr. Spellman said intense. He was absolutely correct. A very passionate and hot verse that makes it very hard to think of anything else. |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 09/11/03 at 03:03 AM Ah you ruby rouge woman you. How you paint your passion onto the unsuspecting reader... well... maybe not SO unsuspecting for those who know you. This is a good one... hot to the touch... fresh and wonderful. |
| Posted by JD Clay on 09/11/03 at 03:41 AM Wow! You certainly turned up the heat with this tourch. I love the ear branding tongue part. Sizzling stuff, Kate.
Peace... |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 09/12/03 at 11:14 AM it is sacriligious to take a line out of context with the whole and say, this is my favorite line, but in this case, it could stand on its own, that exquisite line being ------UNDOING THE LACES OF THOUGHT'S INHIBITIONS. |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 09/13/03 at 07:27 AM your undoing the laces on my thoughts must have undid the laces on my shoes..i tripped over them, ga-ga eyed..:)...SIZZLY |
| Posted by Brian Francis on 09/13/03 at 03:27 PM Wonderful. I love this. It speaks well of those sensual moments.
--bf |
