| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 09/08/03 at 06:13 PM Haiku definition! Clever! |
| Posted by JD Clay on 09/08/03 at 07:09 PM Eight meaningful words that spell out a complete story. I love a happy ending. Great haiku, pal.
Peace... |
| Posted by Kate Demeree on 09/09/03 at 10:04 PM *smiling*.... inspiration, indeed! Well done very clever! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 09/09/03 at 10:17 PM YEOWZA! Talk about transcribing. I'd even dare to suggest renaming this Nature 101. |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 09/10/03 at 02:42 AM Well... there you go. Can't get any simplerthan that. Great idea, David! |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 09/14/03 at 04:39 AM I kinda like what Mia said above. It gives me a feeling of peace. I think its pure simplicity is what does it. |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 09/26/03 at 03:42 PM A memorable and clever verse that really defines the difficult to define. Great verse. |
