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kissing you
by Patricia J Reedall at once
i am surrounded
overwhelming
warm
blinding
nothing
i am lost
with only one thing to hold onto
your lips
my connection to you
and to find myself again
i just have to let go
but i find that very hard
when you kiss me so slow
and your thieving tongue
stealing my breath away
though, lost and breathless
is how i like to stay
02/03/2000 Author's Note: I took Chris' advice and omitted the second verse. I think it's much better without it. ;)
Posted on 08/14/2003
Copyright © 2024 Patricia J Reed
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 08/14/03 at 09:43 PM Passionate and enticing. A very romantic verse that really sweeps the reader into a dreamy embrace. Great read. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/17/03 at 09:11 PM Both powerfully romantic and sensual. That first stanza says it all, and works fine without the second. |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 08/18/03 at 11:12 AM this reminds me of an old song titled young lovers, and is as sad and poignant. |
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