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Stirring Sugar into My Tea by Bruce W NiedtScooped from their bowl, white crystals
slide off the spoon into hot brown liquid,
infusion of leaves, and melt into the brew
stirred for good measure, uniformity,
decomposing to molecules, sucrose solution
dancing the Brownian boogie with caffeine,
tannins, and the rest of the stew,
tilted from cup and warmly down gullet
to stomach, capillaries,
and superhighway bloodstream,
merging with corpuscles on that
circulatory interstate,
branching off exit ramps, fueling
each anatomical town, carrying me
through the morning, the rush hour
of blood to the head. 08/13/2003 Posted on 08/14/2003 Copyright © 2026 Bruce W Niedt
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Agnes Eva on 08/14/03 at 05:07 AM very clever use of 'rush hour'. i like the microscopic magnification into the cup, into the body, yet metaphoric for city at large! |
| Posted by JD Clay on 08/16/03 at 03:30 PM Headdy stuff, you spoonfed boy. You've covered it all but the tollbooth. Deliciously!
Peace... |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/18/03 at 04:53 PM As a long time coffee and tea drinker, sure can relate to this one. Great play by play descriptiveness Bruce. |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 08/22/03 at 01:29 PM ah, tea... the magical drink... well said, i think i shall go have a cup and jump into rush hour myself, this morning... blessings... |
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