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Stirring Sugar into My Tea

by Bruce W Niedt

Scooped from their bowl, white crystals

slide off the spoon into hot brown liquid,

infusion of leaves, and melt into the brew

stirred for good measure, uniformity,

 

decomposing to molecules, sucrose solution

dancing the Brownian boogie with caffeine,

tannins, and the rest of the stew,

tilted from cup and warmly down gullet

 

to stomach, capillaries,

and superhighway bloodstream,

merging with corpuscles on that

circulatory interstate,

 

branching off exit ramps, fueling

each anatomical town, carrying me

through the morning, the rush hour

of blood to the head.

08/13/2003

Posted on 08/14/2003
Copyright © 2026 Bruce W Niedt

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Agnes Eva on 08/14/03 at 05:07 AM

very clever use of 'rush hour'. i like the microscopic magnification into the cup, into the body, yet metaphoric for city at large!

Posted by JD Clay on 08/16/03 at 03:30 PM

Headdy stuff, you spoonfed boy. You've covered it all but the tollbooth. Deliciously! Peace...

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/18/03 at 04:53 PM

As a long time coffee and tea drinker, sure can relate to this one. Great play by play descriptiveness Bruce.

Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 08/22/03 at 01:29 PM

ah, tea... the magical drink... well said, i think i shall go have a cup and jump into rush hour myself, this morning... blessings...

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