| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 07/06/03 at 11:49 PM naturally the angels would envy. your words and ethereal have stolen their thunder. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 07/06/03 at 11:50 PM Imagery sparkling with romantic "fireworks". Sweet and tender.
Editorial note: I think you mean "lose myself in you". :) |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 07/07/03 at 03:38 PM simply heavenly poetry!!! |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 07/07/03 at 08:46 PM Ho, damn! This one is incredible. So, like, do you have a twin somewhere? |
| Posted by Kate Demeree on 07/08/03 at 03:50 AM I absolutley love the second verse! Why is it I see a playful angel in it??? |
| Posted by Alex Smyth on 07/08/03 at 04:01 AM Wicked, alluring, romantic~ every woman's love poem, here! What an imagery! |
| Posted by Maryellen Lebeda-Parra on 07/08/03 at 05:02 PM this is truly beautiful and wonderful ... particularly uplifting for the romantically challenged day i am having |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 07/08/03 at 05:04 PM i love this poem... that is all i can say... you cannot imagine how much i love this poem... awesome... blessings... |
| Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 07/08/03 at 09:46 PM I am going to repeat a word used already -- Passionate, extremely passionate. Also, very sensual. Good job, I like it :) |
| Posted by JD Clay on 07/14/03 at 05:46 AM This spectacular piece is both ethereal and provocative. Steamy stuff, Max.
Peace... |
| Posted by Madeline Pestolesi on 07/23/03 at 07:16 PM Ohhhh, how pretty. |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 04/24/04 at 07:18 PM A fascinating glimpse beyond the scenes - especially the ascension, and the unbalanced finale. Nice dream :) |
| Posted by Mike Loftis on 09/02/04 at 01:39 AM Mara Meade recommended your library and I'm glad she did. Excellent read. |
| Posted by John Ilotan on 09/19/04 at 05:28 PM Celestial indeed,Max. Beautiful write. |
| Posted by Thomas K. Hunt on 09/13/08 at 05:37 AM wow! the embrace of true love....well done Max |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 09/18/08 at 07:50 PM Lovely images here - my fav is "moon drenched seas". Definitely some nice fusion going on here. |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 09/19/08 at 06:54 PM Great Love poem Max...CharMin |
