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On a high

by Rommel Cruz

Let’s get high, I’m on a high
Knowing all they say are lies
Coz you are fine, I am fine
Stepping out their broken lines.

You will glide, I will slide
Away from our unhappiness
You will swirl, I will twirl
Goodbye to longing hearts’ sadness.

Let’s get high, I’m on a high
Basking in the bright blue sky
Coz you are fine, I am fine
The whole world is yours and mine.

You will glide, I will slide
Away from life’s miseries
You will swirl, I will twirl
Goodbye to hungry souls’ emptiness.

So let’s get high,
You’re on a high,
I’m on a high
We’re on a high

On a high, on a high, on a high.

06/28/2003

Posted on 06/28/2003
Copyright © 2020 Rommel Cruz

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Max Bouillet on 06/29/03 at 09:26 PM

This piece really gets you moving... it helps the reader to appreciate life.

Posted by Karl Waldbauer on 06/30/03 at 11:57 AM

Wow! Makes me want to slide and glide with a big fat smile on my face. Bravo!

Posted by Melissa Arel on 07/01/03 at 12:57 PM

I agree with Jessica, this poem definitely sings. Kinda reminds me of that song "Because I Got High" but yours is much better! :) Glad to see you are well.

Posted by Mara Meade on 07/01/03 at 01:58 PM

Oh yeah, this one's got rhythm...!

Posted by Anne Engelen on 07/01/03 at 09:41 PM

...and then my favourite "junk" turned into a "junky" ...having us all trip on his highs!!! :P

Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 07/10/03 at 07:03 AM

I like the rhythm and flow, especially the double rhymes in some lines :)

Posted by Rhyana Fisher on 08/15/03 at 02:42 AM

do sugar highs count?

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