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On a high
by Rommel CruzLets get high, Im on a high
Knowing all they say are lies
Coz you are fine, I am fine
Stepping out their broken lines.
You will glide, I will slide
Away from our unhappiness
You will swirl, I will twirl
Goodbye to longing hearts sadness.
Lets get high, Im on a high
Basking in the bright blue sky
Coz you are fine, I am fine
The whole world is yours and mine.
You will glide, I will slide
Away from lifes miseries
You will swirl, I will twirl
Goodbye to hungry souls emptiness.
So lets get high,
Youre on a high,
Im on a high
Were on a high
On a high, on a high, on a high.
06/28/2003 Posted on 06/28/2003
Copyright © 2024 Rommel Cruz
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 06/29/03 at 09:26 PM This piece really gets you moving... it helps the reader to appreciate life. |
| Posted by Karl Waldbauer on 06/30/03 at 11:57 AM Wow! Makes me want to slide and glide with a big fat smile on my face. Bravo! |
| Posted by Melissa Arel on 07/01/03 at 12:57 PM I agree with Jessica, this poem definitely sings. Kinda reminds me of that song "Because I Got High" but yours is much better! :) Glad to see you are well. |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 07/01/03 at 01:58 PM Oh yeah, this one's got rhythm...! |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 07/01/03 at 09:41 PM ...and then my favourite "junk" turned into a "junky" ...having us all trip on his highs!!! :P |
| Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 07/10/03 at 07:03 AM I like the rhythm and flow, especially the double rhymes in some lines :) |
| Posted by Rhyana Fisher on 08/15/03 at 02:42 AM do sugar highs count? |
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