| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 06/24/03 at 11:12 AM you have captured quite the feeling of forlorness nere Anne and the anguish that companies the parting of the ways. Yet for each despair there is hope with welcoming arms somewhere in the vicinity. |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 06/24/03 at 01:51 PM Ingenious construct on which you place vivid imagery. Thank you for posting it. |
| Posted by Maryellen Lebeda-Parra on 06/24/03 at 04:02 PM wow anne. great work coming out of your unfortunate situation. i feelvery similar, but in a much different context. |
| Posted by Betania Tesch on 06/24/03 at 06:55 PM I always found it odd how we can so easily block outthe reality of a relationship...it's so easy to remember the good times, the nice things...to tip the scales and really just make ourselves feel worse...*sigh* looks like you're in the grief stage with this one. *smiles softly at you* I'm wishing you new slideshow images... |
| Posted by Vimal Rony on 06/24/03 at 09:18 PM It's like your tear drops fell on this page and traced a path on it's own to form such words that are graceful even under the sorrow.Next time they fall may it be as the crystal icons of Joy. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/25/03 at 01:10 AM Reminds me of my own marriage and eventual breakup. I prefer to remember the good times instead of the bad, planting seeds of regret and wonder. |
| Posted by Charles J Hannan on 06/25/03 at 04:50 AM Sweetie, I'm hear for you throughout this whole ordeal...MUAHS!!! |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 06/27/03 at 12:30 PM "... heavily censured good times " "...a brainwashing technique..." Oh Anne, this is raw emotion and an incredible description of what goes on in the mind when confronted with issues that tear the soul into shreads. I wish you peace, dearest one, and appreciate so much the honesty with which you write. |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 06/27/03 at 12:33 PM An interesting look at the workings of the mind and the process of reflection and, hopefully, healing that takes place there. Well done Anne. |
| Posted by JD Clay on 06/28/03 at 04:08 AM It's been said that life is suffering and we endure many deaths throughout this lifetime, each to be followed by rebirth. In which case it may be time for celebration. Good stuff, Anne.
Peace... |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 07/17/03 at 02:36 AM Where reality and wistful thinking collide! Poignant scenario from any perspective. |
| Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 07/17/03 at 05:38 AM Wow, very, very intense |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 08/07/03 at 03:42 PM Anne, I heard that you are going through some difficult days. Just to let you know I care and am praying for you. God bless you. HUGS! Que |
| Posted by Rusty C Arquette on 08/08/03 at 06:36 PM You have offered me your heart and tenderly I accept hoping that you too will take mine in return...I am moved...beyond thought - I am here for you, sweet Anne! - RCat |
