| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 06/14/03 at 01:53 PM Vivid and passionate. I love the ripples that engulf.... great word-crafting. |
| Posted by Jennifer L Banks on 06/14/03 at 06:27 PM great imagery......, you can feel this poem. |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 06/14/03 at 11:12 PM blissful and romantic :) |
| Posted by Britt Zimmerman on 06/15/03 at 12:01 AM *sigh* absolutely beautiful and romantic *sigh again* :) |
| Posted by Charles J Hannan on 06/15/03 at 04:23 AM This is elegant, Rommel!...pure poetry at it's best..:) |
| Posted by Alex Smyth on 06/17/03 at 03:32 AM Romantically seductive! Good poem! |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 06/17/03 at 02:18 PM Maxfield Parish - THAT is the artist I was thinkoing about! Dahlin', your pond is much more beautiful than mine... but beware, I may tresspass again... |
| Posted by Christopher Shin on 06/18/03 at 12:59 AM Very nice man. I remember when I feel for someone just like that. |
| Posted by Agnes Eva on 06/18/03 at 07:26 PM 'porcelain fingers' just lovely.. very soothing and romantic poem |
| Posted by John Ilotan on 06/19/03 at 12:57 AM Absolutly beautiful. This is one of your best. Great work Rommel. |
| Posted by Jean Mollett on 08/08/03 at 05:12 AM Hi Rommel,
Beautiful, maybe make ya blush a little, Hee! Hee!. Emotional, oh the passion in it. Beautiful. Jean |
| Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 08/14/03 at 02:51 PM I really like this image: "Like snowleaves
Falling
Flickering
Twirling in the fireflies’ light."
This is one of my Rommel-favorites! |
