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Earth's Canvas
by Melissa Arel
Unnoticed
Unseen
Omnipresent
Forgotten storms
Colored stars
Chalky moons
Twinkling twilight throught the night's dark cloak
Hiding the unmerciful sun
Stretched out to behold the valleys
Plains
Mountains
Streams
Sunlight giving life to deathly-marked shadows
Night air breezing
Shivering
Beholding all whispering sighs.
04/27/1997 Author's Note: *Written when I was 16.. one of the first poems I ever wrote*
Posted on 06/06/2003
Copyright © 2024 Melissa Arel
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/06/03 at 04:56 PM For being one of your first poems, this is pretty good Melissa. I always enjoy seeing/reading how others started. |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 06/06/03 at 06:44 PM This is a pretty little piece and the title fits it perfectly. |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 06/08/03 at 03:21 AM knowing very well the present and the middle, it is wonderful to see a piece from the very beginning...and showing already the future concern with color light and image...good poem Mel |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 06/08/03 at 04:48 AM Ah, sweet... a nice reflection of the wonder of nature! |
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