| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Rommel Cruz on 05/23/03 at 03:49 PM =((( |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 05/24/03 at 08:39 AM an older poem..and yet I sense this feeling is more up-to-date, as recent conversations would seem to attest. Well-described state of mind, even if temporary |
| Posted by Charles J Hannan on 05/25/03 at 06:48 AM This is a great little piece, Melissa..I notice it is an older one of yours..hope your not so alone anymore.:) |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 05/26/03 at 03:04 PM Great use of the broken chain and rust to exemplify the aloneness we all face from time to time. |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 05/26/03 at 03:57 PM The contrast of chain and disconnection are really effective, the tears, the rust... powerful images. Good poem. |
| Posted by Junemarie Roldan on 07/04/06 at 03:51 AM Powerful in its simplicity. Great write |
