| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Rommel Cruz on 05/17/03 at 01:03 AM nice read. welcome to PPS |
| Posted by J. P. Davies on 05/17/03 at 08:27 AM Welcome to Pathetic...:) |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 05/18/03 at 11:05 AM Imaginative. Reflects the mood and the longing. |
| Posted by Melina Raven Maness Diebold on 05/20/03 at 05:38 AM Welcome to pathetic! The hands/tears analogy is nice!
Mina |
| Posted by John Ilotan on 05/23/03 at 04:01 AM This is excellent writing. I like the short, clear and very vivid way it is expressed. Nice work. |
| Posted by Maryellen Lebeda-Parra on 12/06/03 at 09:18 PM i too think that the "short" works well for this. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 04/21/09 at 08:17 PM I love that last stanza - can see the hands coming/tearing/pulling down the walls with great emotion. |
