Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Amanda L Marron on 05/07/03 at 12:01 AM such a great form like the smoke coming out just before the genie pops out of his lamp |
Posted by Charles J Hannan on 05/07/03 at 02:04 AM Awwww, Anne...this is wonderful!...you capture the theme of lamp smoke with poetry so well..MUAHS!!! |
Posted by Rommel Cruz on 05/07/03 at 05:36 AM oh look at that smoke... but i thought you can only have up to 3 wishes. how come you have 5 here. hmmp. lol. =)
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Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 05/07/03 at 05:51 AM Wow, I love the form of that poem. Great job! |
Posted by Charles E Minshall on 05/07/03 at 06:04 AM I really like this one Annie, good work....Charlie |
Posted by Kara Hayostek on 05/07/03 at 11:58 AM Wow, very creative and very clever. |
Posted by Rhyana Fisher on 05/07/03 at 03:57 PM niiiiiice, i can see the genie there with arms folded. definitely an unique work. |
Posted by David R Spellman on 05/07/03 at 04:09 PM Very creative and such a wonderful and evocative invitation. Love it! |
Posted by Maryellen Lebeda-Parra on 05/07/03 at 06:17 PM most amazing! I am so happy you FINALLY posted something! I've been waiting! |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/07/03 at 06:24 PM LOL! Highly effective use of color, shape, and words Anne!! |
Posted by Ashok Sharda on 05/08/03 at 03:37 PM A beautiful flight of imagination. Not unlike the Arabian Nights. Its like a concrete visual poem, vibrating with every thing positive. |
Posted by Alex Smyth on 05/31/03 at 08:59 PM I LOVELOVELOVE visual poetry, and this is one of the finest I've seen! Perfect combination of oral and ocular!! |
Posted by Lisa-Dawn Sparling on 06/02/03 at 05:27 AM I truly enjoy poems that say so much with so little words. You capture it fabulously. |
Posted by Graeme Fielden on 08/14/03 at 05:31 PM This poem is sensorially amazing at every level...I cannot add further to that which has been said except "well done"...:) |
Posted by JD Clay on 12/26/03 at 04:33 AM This is quite an inventation, Anne. I rather like the cosmic feel and the vaporizing visual effect. Good stuff!
Pe4ce... |
Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 05/21/15 at 11:28 AM I miss your work, Anne. Miss you. |