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Between The Dark And Dark

by Cole Miller

It was in the dark I met you
And in the dark you left me
It was in the dark I was born
And in the dark that I died
But between the dark and dark
You opened me up to the light


Posted on 04/30/2003
Copyright © 2020 Cole Miller

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Amanda L Marron on 05/03/03 at 04:04 PM

i've had a person who has done this for me. i felt like i was all alone into the dark and they brought in that bright shining light.

Posted by Shayla R Cakes on 08/29/03 at 05:35 AM

yip. i like the dark...

Posted by JD Clay on 08/29/03 at 12:23 PM

An affirmative piece that speaks with a ray of hope, while tending a provocative mood. Congratulations on becoming Poet of the Day, Nicole. Peace...

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/29/03 at 01:08 PM

Superb play of words and opposites, where both light and darkness run very deep. Excellent choice for POTD...congrats!

Posted by Rachelle Howe on 08/29/03 at 01:10 PM

congrats on POTD!

Posted by Max Bouillet on 08/29/03 at 03:30 PM

Very wise and well said. An excellent example of wisdom expressed through verse. Thanks for sharing.

Posted by Andrew S Adams on 08/29/03 at 05:40 PM

Dude! you are soooo poem of the day! hoo-ha! this is such a hopeful, short little poem. it is absolutely fabulous dah-ling. :) :) you rock!

Posted by Maryellen Lebeda-Parra on 11/08/03 at 12:55 AM

this is beautiful and hopeful

Posted by Mike Loftis on 09/02/04 at 12:18 AM

Normally I don't respond to the very short poems but this one is soooo good. Loved it.

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