| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 04/30/03 at 01:01 PM Vivid, keen observation of the change of seasons. The apparent contradiction of sweet and lament emphasizes the warmth of the summer into the sometimes melancholy beauty of the brisk fall. |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 05/13/03 at 03:03 PM 'sweet words of lament' Paradoxically subtle. Sounds so positive. |
| Posted by Don Coffman on 08/21/03 at 02:38 AM Beautiful, clever, and very much what a haiku should be! |
| Posted by Alex Smyth on 10/03/03 at 03:23 AM Ahhhhhh, yes, I LOVE autumn, you've definately caught the spirit of it here. |
| Posted by Don Coffman on 10/13/03 at 09:29 AM Make my old comment x2. Congrats on PotD :) |
| Posted by Kate Demeree on 10/13/03 at 12:26 PM Oh.... how beautiful, you do these Wonderfuly! *smile* congrats by the way on POTD |
| Posted by JD Clay on 10/13/03 at 12:49 PM A brilliant expression, Graeme. Like hearing a burst of color, your Poem of the Day has sprung to life. Congratulations!
Peace... |
| Posted by Kristine Briese on 10/13/03 at 01:23 PM Poignant, beautiful. |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 10/13/03 at 01:29 PM Excellent description of the season and a fine choice for POTD. Congrats! |
| Posted by Lori Johnson on 10/13/03 at 03:25 PM Lovely haiku, congrats! :) |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 10/13/03 at 06:12 PM Congratulations on POTD! |
| Posted by Aaron Howard on 10/13/03 at 08:09 PM Not really my cup of tea being so short and all.. kinda just leaves you asking for more.. but nice work.. great job on POTD... |
| Posted by Alex Smyth on 10/13/03 at 11:20 PM What a timely POTD! Many congratulations:o) |
| Posted by Thomas K. Hunt on 11/13/03 at 11:25 AM I do so love the Fall....well done |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 01/22/05 at 12:43 AM "Short, sweet words of lament" that is an awesome line. The comparison of sweet and lament, bring forth an interesting emotion that doesn't seem unfamiliar. Great read. |
| Posted by William Brunk on 10/02/09 at 02:36 AM got my mind going fast, but slowed me into a thought at the end.
well done |
