| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Melissa Arel on 04/29/03 at 12:49 PM This is really an excellent write, David. The use of imagery from the Wizard Of Oz was flawless.. great read! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/29/03 at 06:18 PM Excellent David. One of my favorite movies nice applied to in complex metaphor to our all too real world. |
| Posted by Kate Demeree on 04/29/03 at 08:20 PM This caught my eye simply with the title, and as I read I could feel the empty hollow feeling one gets when dreams do not come true. If I had a rainbow.... I would give it to you, My Friend *hugs* |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 04/29/03 at 11:42 PM Literary allusions abound and are very brilliantly meshed together. This poem is to be read over and over again. Differing facets of meaning glisten as the mind turns this gem in its light. |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 04/30/03 at 03:19 AM Your poem is a bit of a rainbow on a dreary day...Charlie |
| Posted by Rhodora M Fitzgerald on 04/30/03 at 09:56 AM Loved this piece David! The rainbow is one of lifes little pleasures that we experience all too infrequently, but then.... I guess they wouldn't be so "special" if we saw them everyday, right? What I liked about this piece was the feeling the reader gets of reaching beyond the rainbow... the place we all long to go. :o) |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 05/01/03 at 06:47 PM this is creative and just a great read! |
| Posted by Gabrielle L Gervais on 05/03/03 at 11:36 PM in this, i really see a piece of you. |
| Posted by Rommel Cruz on 05/10/03 at 04:14 PM this is a rainbow in itself. =) |
| Posted by Kristine Briese on 05/16/03 at 10:04 PM Oh, flawless in its consistent imagery. Excellent work, my friend. |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 07/07/03 at 09:35 PM Beautiful imgery and concept woven with a popular story... brilliant. Thanks for sharing. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 07/23/03 at 01:47 AM Just read this one again. I was correct, a poem to be savored again and again. |
