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Fight Or Flight

by Cole Miller

It all comes down to
Fight or flight, today I think
I forgot my wings

04/18/2003

Author's Note: 5-7-5

Posted on 04/20/2003
Copyright © 2024 Cole Miller

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Allan Haslinds on 04/21/03 at 05:23 AM

I've been there!

Posted by Mara Meade on 04/21/03 at 07:14 PM

Oh yeah... I understand this one. Good one, Nicole.

Posted by Andrew S Adams on 06/12/03 at 05:04 AM

yes, this certainly does have the same tone as 'sink or swim', however, i enjoy this one slightly better than the said piece. great stuff.

Posted by Melissa Arel on 08/27/03 at 04:38 PM

Niiiice! ;-)

Posted by Ashley Beaudoin on 11/09/03 at 03:59 AM

nicely written!

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 12/10/03 at 03:11 AM

Well, there's just two options in a stress situation-fight or flight. Fight is what is life. Sometimes flight can be part of the strategy of a fight. So, fight even when you flight. Nice minimal.

Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 12/10/03 at 08:25 AM

everyone has one of those days... well written and profound... blessings and congrats on POTD!

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 12/10/03 at 12:22 PM

Quite a variation in theme with the haiku forum. One can always play dead! ;) LOL! Congratulations on POTD!

Posted by Andrew S Adams on 12/10/03 at 01:32 PM

god, you're just queen of the POTD, now arentchya? seriously. this piece rocks, simplistic in it's beauty but alltogether a profound statement. amazing. stuff. congradulations child! peace:a

Posted by Kristine Briese on 12/10/03 at 04:52 PM

Oh, excellent!

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