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I can breathe again...

by Ginette T Belle

soft sun bleeds on lips
the beat of the city loud
summer sneaks in slow

04/15/2003

Posted on 04/15/2003
Copyright © 2024 Ginette T Belle

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Maryellen Lebeda-Parra on 04/15/03 at 08:10 PM

so much meaning in so few words ... i love when that happens

Posted by John Ilotan on 04/16/03 at 02:02 PM

A very pretty haiku. I esp. liked the first line, nice imagery.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/16/03 at 04:14 PM

I like how the text plays off the title here, and to a certain degree I agree. Summer here though can get awfully humid, and I don't have an air conditioner. My favorite time of year is in fact late Summer/early Fall...September to October, then I can breath. :o)

Posted by Melissa Arel on 05/09/06 at 01:28 PM

This is a gorgeous haiku, Ginette.. you've done a wonderful job here!

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