| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Adrian Calhoun on 04/09/03 at 08:49 AM Good questions. Ones we all seek the answers to, but only in the end will we know. A well written thought-provoking piece. |
| Posted by Melissa Arel on 04/11/03 at 04:19 PM Excellent rhyme throughout. Great read. |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 04/24/03 at 06:45 PM great flow and nice idea :) |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 12/21/03 at 11:35 PM I've built my own temple
With the tools of my mind
Is the foundation strong enough?
Will it last for all time?
Whoo... good question and one I've wondered about... how much have I realized God's Will in the building, and how much was mine? Very thought provoking.
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| Posted by Kristine Briese on 01/26/11 at 10:31 PM I really like this pondering piece; it's got a wonderful rhythm and a certain hopefulness about it. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/01/11 at 08:38 PM I also like that third stanza and wonder about temples I have built. This is thought provoking. Thank you. |
