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10 American Pencils

by Bruce W Niedt

I.

10 American pencils

stand at attention

pointedly

in regimented box

standard-issue yellow

insignia #2

not too hard

not too soft

what was once lead

now leader

graphite souls

ready to write history

indisputable

unerring

or even if erring

rubbed out by

pink rubber bottoms

no tracks

no trace

unindictable

 

 

II.

10 American pencils

shaved and planed

from finest virgin pine

tempting us to test

their versatility

to caress between

thumb and forefinger

and scribble to bliss

test-drive down

ruled lanes of blue

or tear across

the open page

(closed-circuit track –

do not attempt)

no matter

the proof is in the trail

all work behind them

all thoughts that push

them ahead

 

 

III.

10 American pencils

go off to war

no foreign stylus will sully

these clean white sheets

no-sirree-bob

fire them off

from dense-pack barrels

propaganda written

where they land

javelins to pierce

the hearts and minds

of literary infidels

let the enemy break resolve

hands behind heads

keep them behind

a stockade of pencils

let them despair

of the pointed tops

read the handwriting

on the yellow walls

04/06/2003

Author's Note: A bit of a departure for me - inspired by a "found title" (a label on a package of pencils - I had no idea why they were called "American pencils" so imagined....)

Posted on 04/06/2003
Copyright © 2024 Bruce W Niedt

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/08/03 at 01:53 AM

Quite original, imaginative. Never read a poem about pencils before...good one!

Posted by Rusty C Arquette on 04/08/03 at 11:31 AM

Proud patriotic poetic pencils; who would'a thunk? - Interesting exercise in wordplay - Cool! - RCat

Posted by Anne Engelen on 04/09/03 at 04:01 PM

Sublime writing!

Posted by Rommel Cruz on 04/25/03 at 05:13 PM

oi i like this a lot. and im not even patriotic (i aint amercian). :p

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 09/19/06 at 04:19 AM

Very creative - I like the three explorations of these 10 pencils. Thank you!

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