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Our Daily Bread
by Rhodora M FitzgeraldMeager, humble and grateful,
hungry souls are like birds at a feeder
dependant upon a superior being
to satisfy their needs.
03/28/2003 Author's Note: I feel like I should add more to this... but for now, this is how it reads.
Posted on 03/28/2003
Copyright © 2024 Rhodora M Fitzgerald
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Jack Lanier on 03/31/03 at 12:17 PM Great one Rhodora! Inspiring!...Jack :) |
| Posted by Lori Johnson on 03/31/03 at 06:46 PM Excellent start, Rho. On it's on, it is still impressive. But when (if) you add more, let me know, I'd love to see any new additions. :) |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/01/03 at 05:48 PM Hmmm...I'd say a fairly accurate analogy. |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 04/02/03 at 07:56 PM Good poem Rhoda: Dependent on another being?...Charlie |
| Posted by Adrian Calhoun on 04/12/03 at 08:14 AM Actually it says a lot just like it is. Add if you must, but I like it. |
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