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Be a Vacuum
by Rhodora M FitzgeraldSuck up the dirt from the earth
and dispose of it readily.
Keep your own floor clean
and don't forget
to change your filter frequently! 03/28/2003 Author's Note: ...just a silly little image that popped into my head
Posted on 03/28/2003
Copyright © 2026 Rhodora M Fitzgerald
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 03/28/03 at 12:35 PM Quite an image. Good read! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 03/28/03 at 05:43 PM As Leonard Cohen once put it, we writers have to blacken a lot of pages, before we get to the good stuff, or better vacuum a lot of brain cells! :o) |
| Posted by JD Clay on 03/31/03 at 12:33 AM I got sucked up be your extrapolation, Rhodora. Time for some spring cleaning, eh!
Peace... |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 03/31/03 at 11:28 AM Its not just a silly little image. No change can ever happen unless the room is cleaned.Nothing can really be attained if the rooms are untidy and unclean. You have said this effectively. |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 04/04/03 at 03:46 PM I was thinking... Oh, she's an environmentalist! then enjoyed the moment of routine in a home. Also reminded me that I have not changed the filter for three months... and I wonder why I cough and my eyes water... thanks for the pause into reality. |
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