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by Anne Engelen

Tears

 

Rise from my soul

 

Sparkling pearls

Embracing my tender woes

 

Fake little diamonds

Irresistible splendour

Of cold blue light

 

Invaluable

 

Your price of pain

03/22/2003

Posted on 03/22/2003
Copyright © 2024 Anne Engelen

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 03/22/03 at 07:29 PM

Ditto on those first two comments. Such heartwrenching expression for so few words.

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 03/23/03 at 03:05 AM

out of the lament of soul you conjure a wonderfully sparkling image here Anne.

Posted by Charles J Hannan on 03/23/03 at 07:04 AM

(((((((((((ANNE))))))))))))you still got it!!

Posted by Cathlyn Cartier on 03/23/03 at 04:28 PM

You pour so much potent sentiment into a few carefully chosen words and seldom do you fail to touch my heart deeply. Well done!

Posted by JD Clay on 03/23/03 at 10:39 PM

This is nothing less than emotional brilliance. Happy Birthday Angel, enjoy your day. Peace...

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 03/24/03 at 04:41 AM

Price of pain, this is painful. probably beyond that. This has to felt. Rather sensed.The entire Being seems to be engulfed by this pain. The pain seems to be inside you and you inside it.

Posted by Kate Demeree on 03/24/03 at 10:05 PM

*soft tears* Oh Anne... you gather me in, with this your agony, your beauty.... your heart *hugs*

Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 03/26/03 at 04:01 PM

This felt like a punch in the chest. I think this is my new favorite Anne, thank you.

Posted by Christina Bruno on 03/26/03 at 04:31 PM

*hugs* I am feeling this poem on a personal level

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 03/31/03 at 07:19 AM

I hate to see or hear anyone cry. Good poem Annie but for me a sad one....Hugs Charlie

Posted by Vrinda Agrawal on 11/24/08 at 05:20 AM

you say so much in so few words! depression is hard.

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