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Earthsuit (haiku)

by Melissa Arel



My body is an earthsuit
And our love is bursting at the seams
As the child within me grows



03/20/2003

Posted on 03/20/2003
Copyright © 2024 Melissa Arel

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Ken Harnisch on 03/21/03 at 03:35 AM

ah..so much said in so few words! I concur with "beautiful!"

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 03/24/03 at 04:46 PM

A beautiful creative piece on creation.

Posted by Rhodora M Fitzgerald on 03/24/03 at 06:50 PM

Superb and very creative! I loved this! :o)

Posted by Max Bouillet on 08/04/03 at 03:05 PM

Positivly pregnant with life and great imagery. Great word choice.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 07/26/06 at 01:53 PM

Earthsuit - what a wonderful word you have coined! Perfect haiku!

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