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twilight
by Brynn Dizackpulling tears was like
pulling teeth with you there was no
liquid left in my body i was
filled with sand, red, an
hourglass
waiting and
watching you
wasting time
you were standing
just outside what my headlights could reach
i pulled the curtain down against the window
seperating our two rooms
to see if you would notice
then realizing, of course, that i could
not see your reaction through the shade. 03/16/2003 Posted on 03/16/2003
Copyright © 2024 Brynn Dizack
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 03/16/03 at 09:24 PM Excellent poetics throughout Ithica. Well expressed! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 03/16/03 at 09:25 PM Oops...sorry Ithaca. |
| Posted by Beth K Hannah on 07/01/03 at 05:28 AM you work wonders with your poetry. |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 07/24/03 at 10:50 PM Vivid scene depiction.. the last lines were great... wanting to see the reaction. Great writing. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 10/15/09 at 06:52 PM Congrats on POTD! |
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