| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 03/15/03 at 05:55 PM LOL! (.) well stated Einstein. |
| Posted by JD Clay on 03/15/03 at 06:00 PM I love this premise, Ashok. Intriguing. Is there a time when you are not who you am?
Peace... |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 03/17/03 at 01:50 AM Time out Ashok. Good poem.....Charlie |
| Posted by Lori Johnson on 03/17/03 at 04:07 PM Intriguing indeed, I had to read it twice. :) |
| Posted by Graeme Fielden on 03/17/03 at 06:30 PM Nice one Ashok, but when you're not on time do you cease to be yourself?...:) |
| Posted by Betania Tesch on 03/17/03 at 10:32 PM I am everywhere and nowhere at once. Where are you, again? Can we meet in the Z time, and then in this (..) we might undo some of the ...'s And hey, while we're at it, let's undo the doing. *smiles* |
| Posted by Sarah Brookes on 03/18/03 at 05:56 PM Great work, nice use of punctuation to illustrate your point too! Really something for the brain to chew over. |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 03/19/03 at 01:10 AM Ashok... you make my brain work overtime, dear friend... and its a good thing because you sure wipe those cobwebs away with one swipe of your pen! |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 03/19/03 at 02:20 PM Right! You stand with the philosophers of Reality. Proof of existence is in being! In thinking and therefore knowing. Good poem! |
| Posted by Jacki M Butler on 06/17/03 at 01:59 AM I am when I am, so simple, yet it really makes you think. Nicely said. |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 09/09/03 at 05:12 PM Perceived causality? Are we the culmination of various time selves through out an existence beyond time. Very thought-provoking. I am afraid you may give me a headache on this one. Thanks for sharing. |
