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Hesitate
by Sarah BrookesFloundering on the precipice
indecision
dare you eat a peach?
Trickling juices down lustful throats
ravage flesh, torn asunder,
or rot as virginfruit
decay
untouched?
Satisfy rabid carnal needs or
abstain from selfish deeds
Im
two-minded let me eat/keep
my peach.
11/19/2002 Posted on 03/13/2003
Copyright © 2024 Sarah Brookes
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Rhodora M Fitzgerald on 03/13/03 at 06:48 PM This is very profound Sarah! So much meaning behind so few words. This one is my favorite in your library so far. btw.....welcome to Pathetic! :o) |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 03/15/03 at 01:09 AM Sara this is excellent! |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 03/18/03 at 09:14 PM Peachy..and I don't mean fuzzy and yellow either...:) |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 03/25/03 at 05:21 PM Superb expression of culinary and sexual ambivalance! |
| Posted by Agnes Eva on 05/09/03 at 04:18 PM mmm....sexy... and fruity! yum |
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