| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Meredith C Hartwell on 03/12/03 at 08:13 PM Captivating. I might change the repetition of "woolly/wollen" if anything. Welcome to pathetic. : ) |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 03/12/03 at 08:57 PM Lots of vivid symbolic imagery for the mind to "play with". You have a feel for words! Welcome to Pathetic. |
| Posted by Rusty C Arquette on 03/12/03 at 10:33 PM A wonderful use of the word - Economic, and a taste treat for the eyes and ears that carries me right along with you - Very nice! - More please - Welcome to the fold, Sarah - RCat |
| Posted by Megan Harvey on 03/13/03 at 05:07 AM I really like your words choice/combination, specifically "Waxcotten webs." When read outload, the rhythm has a near lulling affect while not losing force. |
| Posted by Maryellen Lebeda-Parra on 03/22/03 at 04:53 AM you are amazing! i wish that i had the style you have ... but alas ... i stumple along in my own simplistic way. |
| Posted by Charles J Hannan on 04/09/03 at 05:00 AM A new level of thinking...congrates!! |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 04/09/03 at 10:58 AM You are brilliant Sarah, Congrats! |
| Posted by JD Clay on 04/09/03 at 04:18 PM You have certainly put the metaphor to good use here, Sarah. Congratulations on becoming Poet of the Day.
Peace... |
| Posted by Agnes Eva on 05/09/03 at 05:02 PM you have a way of wordsmithing that really gets at the core of feelings, in a nice abstract association way.. enjoyed this one, especially the opening stanza |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 05/28/07 at 05:52 PM Stifling and enervating. Allow me to smother you in appreciation :) |
