by Melissa Arel

Crack the shell open
Destiny falls in my hand
My fate tastes damn good


Posted on 02/11/2003
Copyright © 2020 Melissa Arel

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Anne Engelen on 02/11/03 at 02:31 PM

Delicious little haiku!!

Posted by Ken Harnisch on 02/11/03 at 03:17 PM

ah, so that's the way the cookie crumbles!

Posted by David R Spellman on 02/11/03 at 03:52 PM

Loved this delectable little piece!

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/11/03 at 05:58 PM

LOL! Excellent, punchy!!

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 02/11/03 at 07:42 PM


Posted by Agnes Eva on 03/28/03 at 07:56 PM

Ah the satisfying crunch of sweet destiny.. heehee.

Posted by Rommel Cruz on 05/10/03 at 03:46 PM

ahahaha. yeah i like eating the fortune cookie. =)

Posted by Traci Mabats on 04/13/04 at 03:32 PM

oh yeah! The cookie is my favorite part of Chinese take out. :) Great poem.

Posted by Anne Howe on 04/20/04 at 08:44 AM

an excellent read ...... just love what you say here

Posted by Delilah Coyne on 04/17/06 at 04:59 PM

Haiku perfection! Sweet and tasty little verse!

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