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Whirling Dervish (haiku)

by Melissa Arel





Your love spins me ’round
Just like a whirling dervish
Leaving me breathless




02/06/2003

Posted on 02/06/2003
Copyright © 2024 Melissa Arel

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Ken Harnisch on 02/06/03 at 05:56 PM

to be such a cyclone....for such a poet...:)

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/07/03 at 03:39 AM

hehe...excellent way of putting it...as love should be!

Posted by Keith D Allison on 02/09/03 at 03:02 AM

very nice, like this

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 02/11/03 at 02:34 PM

like a whirling dervish, one with space and time.

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 02/11/03 at 07:57 PM

Excellent love Haiku Mel...Charlie

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