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by Cathlyn Cartier

People say that you're too old,
that I should find someone closer to my age...

I never listened to what other people said.

People think that I can do "better",
if I would only go out and socialize more...

I never really cared what other people thought.

I know that you are always there when I need you...
even though others can't be found.

You have said that you will always be my friend,
and your actions speak more clearly than a dictionary of words...

I think that is what really matters most.

Who needs "other people" when I have found such a. friend as you?

02/05/2003

Posted on 02/06/2003
Copyright © 2024 Cathlyn Cartier

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Charles E Minshall on 02/06/03 at 12:27 AM

Good poem Cathlyn. It is the quality of the friendship that counts. Of course I say that because I am an old duffer....Charlie

Posted by Lori Johnson on 02/06/03 at 09:05 PM

So, are you trying to say you don't need me??? :( (Kidding) Well done, hiddne meaning & all. LOL I hope you've shared this with the person who inspired it? :)

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 02/07/03 at 02:32 PM

Well, when 'others' walk into the periphery of 'I', they are part of 'my'.My friend, my brother, my mother,obviously closer than any 'other'.They are part of our inner world.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/09/03 at 01:38 AM

Excellent wake up call Carthlyn. Why should age make a different when a pair are compatable in every other way.

Posted by JD Clay on 02/23/03 at 04:29 PM

Your wonderful verse is a vision of oneness, with or without popular opinion. I am reminded that soulmates know no age. Good stuff, Cathlyn. Peace...

Posted by Agnes Eva on 07/26/03 at 05:02 PM

a sweet and gentle tribute to friendship

Posted by Max Bouillet on 08/29/03 at 03:44 PM

Touching poem that questions cultural pressures. Who sets the norms anyway? In my opinion, they haven't been doing a very good job. Great verse that really makes one think.

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